Always Yes

July 7, 2011
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When he walks in,
does he wrap his arms around your body?
When he looks at you,
does it look completely naughty?

Does he make your heart pound,
and your body tingle?
Does he change your mind,
when you just want to be single?

Will he dance to all your music,
while you sing along,
and grab your hand, and pull you in,
when he knows the words in the song?

Can he kiss you until your lips go numb.
while you sink into his embrace,
or make you feel as unique
as a yard of hand made lace?

Can nothing compare?
Will he always be best?
Forever and always,
Yes!





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Regs_the_Shorty said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:32 pm
Extremely cute loved it :)
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:33 pm
thanks:) heyy- read asylum? please:)
 
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:39 pm
Okk will do :)
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 1:45 pm
gracious amigo:)
 
Regs_the_Shorty replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 5:04 pm
Hahahaha :)
 
Cryswithaly said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 7:48 pm

I used to have a guy like that. It's complicate between us.

But this is sooo cute!:D

 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 9:20 am

Well it's now complicated between us too....... :/

 

thanks:)

 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:51 pm

This is first off, too cute! You're lucky to have a boy friend like that[: My favorite part was "or make you feel as unique

as a yard of hand made lace?" Really like this one! Keep writing[:

 

 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:32 am
Thanks:) that was the part i wasnt sure about... it didnt sound right to me.. but i guess it turned out ok! :)
 
.Izzy. said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Cute....I'm jealous!
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:31 am
hahahahahahahha:))) <3
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 3:42 pm
I like the rhyme scheme and the way it flows. Could you comment on some of my stuff? I always like to get some feedback from talented writers :)
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:47 am

Thanks!:)

but im not THAT talented...

 
Pngsaxin replied...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 9:31 am
don't underestimate yourself. this poem is beyond great and the best poems come when you least expect them to
 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:31 am
Well thank you... you got me blushing at least(im serious!)
 
Mariam.J said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:20 am

A really cute poem.

Quite cliched, a litte bit.

But cute ( :

If you take it in the metaphoric sense, it's got a real good meaning ( :

 

 
Reader101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 8:45 am
Thanks!:) im glad you liked it!:)
 
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