Always Yes

July 7, 2011
By Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114


When he walks in,
does he wrap his arms around your body?
When he looks at you,
does it look completely naughty?

Does he make your heart pound,
and your body tingle?
Does he change your mind,
when you just want to be single?

Will he dance to all your music,
while you sing along,
and grab your hand, and pull you in,
when he knows the words in the song?

Can he kiss you until your lips go numb.
while you sink into his embrace,
or make you feel as unique
as a yard of hand made lace?

Can nothing compare?
Will he always be best?
Forever and always,
Yes!


The author's comments:
I have an amazing boyfriend and every single one of these things is true I believe... I think that everyone has that person you're destined to be with and when you find that person, it will all fall into place, even if you argue sometimes. Even better he plays piano! I wish I could play the piano! But I play the cello so I can't complain! He plays with me... :) <3

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on Aug. 17 2011 at 5:04 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Hahahaha :)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:45 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

gracious amigo:)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:39 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Okk will do :)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:33 pm
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

thanks:) heyy- read asylum? please:)

on Aug. 17 2011 at 1:32 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Extremely cute loved it :)

on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:20 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Well it's now complicated between us too....... :/

 

thanks:)


on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:48 pm
Cryswithaly SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was 5 my mother told me the key to life is happiness. My teacher asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. She said I didn't understand the assignment. I told her she didn't understand life.
-John Lennon (Revised)

I used to have a guy like that. It's complicate between us.

But this is sooo cute!:D


on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:32 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Thanks:) that was the part i wasnt sure about... it didnt sound right to me.. but i guess it turned out ok! :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:31 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

hahahahahahahha:))) <3

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:31 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Well thank you... you got me blushing at least(im serious!)

on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:51 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
5 articles 3 photos 178 comments

This is first off, too cute! You're lucky to have a boy friend like that[: My favorite part was "or make you feel as unique

as a yard of hand made lace?" Really like this one! Keep writing[:

 


.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 1:06 pm
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
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Cute....I'm jealous!

on Jul. 22 2011 at 9:31 am
Pngsaxin BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is awesome:)

don't underestimate yourself. this poem is beyond great and the best poems come when you least expect them to

on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:47 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Thanks!:)

but im not THAT talented...


on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:45 am
Reader101 PLATINUM, Amarillo, Texas
42 articles 4 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre, some of us are just better at hiding it." -Andrew Clark(The Breakfast Club)

"Lack of format? Not possible in my opinion. Writing is an art, therefore you do you what you want." -b_gomez114

Thanks!:) im glad you liked it!:)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 3:42 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

I like the rhyme scheme and the way it flows. Could you comment on some of my stuff? I always like to get some feedback from talented writers :)

Mariam.J GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 12:20 am
Mariam.J GOLD, Dubai, Other
16 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't have many favourite quotes , though I do love the truth that 'change is constant .'
For you , a thousand times over - Hassan , The Kite Runner
If you want to leave footprints in the sands of time , don't drag your feet - Rudyard Kipling

A really cute poem.

Quite cliched, a litte bit.

But cute ( :

If you take it in the metaphoric sense, it's got a real good meaning ( :

 



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