My daddy served in the army

May 20, 2011
By titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
real eyes realize real lies/ true love never fades


I would love to see you one time, to touch your skin; feel it on mine. I know your not there and life's not fair. To know that you'll never be mine.
I don't see you ever, when I had a bad day. So much for my troubles just melting away. I miss your smile, just to see you laugh. Then mommy and I saw your staff.
"We had a bad day, Your dad has left, he's gone away." He went to work and he served with pride. I know we'll all miss his eyes.
I looked at my picture of my daddy and Brie, will he ever miss me? Mommies face got all red; her eyes got so puffy. I started feeling my nose get all stuffy.
then I realized Daddy is gone, so I decided I'd write him a song. I miss his letters, Mommy finally stopped knitting him sweaters. I would sing this with him in harmony, be he had to go serve you and my country.







Brie loves you daddy<3


The author's comments:
to children who's daddies never came back. We will all miss their smiles.

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on Jul. 6 2011 at 8:51 am
titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
11 articles 5 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
real eyes realize real lies/ true love never fades

thank you =)

 


on Jul. 5 2011 at 8:53 pm
Aubreylax PLATINUM, Pomfret Center, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Give in to love, or live in fear

This is really really good. 

on Jun. 22 2011 at 9:41 pm
titangods31 GOLD, Brevard, North Carolina
11 articles 5 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
real eyes realize real lies/ true love never fades

thanks =) I wrote it because I know how it feels to miss your dad, and I thought people would like it

 


on Jun. 22 2011 at 7:13 pm
1234543212345 BRONZE, Cedarville, Arkansas
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This is really beautiful.


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