Promise Me

May 18, 2011
Promise me

That you won't,

'cause i know

that you don't
know the pain
I feel inside;

the clouds, the storms
I try to hide.

The questions I'm
forced to divert

'cause no one sees

how much this hurts.

My face is bright,
my eyes are dry,

so no one sees

the rain inside. 

"It'll be okay; I know how you feel."

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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 3:44 pm
hay hay hay, i do love the rhyming scheme and the use of quotism. cest incroyable.
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