Change

May 1, 2011
By suziesnowflake GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
suziesnowflake GOLD, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Whatever comes, let it come. Whatever stays, let it stay. Whatever goes, let it go."


We had been friends
For some years,
We shared many laughs
And even a few tears.

There were secrets
Only we would hold
No one else had any idea
Because it was only you I told.

We promised things would never change
That they’d always stay the same,
Now that you broke your promise
Two can play that game.

You never used to judge me
Based on what I said or did,
All of that completely changed
Once you met that kid.

I told you once
I told you twice
Not to fall
Because he’s nice.

You didn’t listen
So you were hurt,
Okay, so what?
He did the dirt.

He apologized and he tried
Tried to make it right,
Everything about you completely changed
All in one night.

It slowly showed before that night
How you became a mess,
Talkin’ smack like never before
And that I must confess.

That guy’s been my bestfriend
Way before you two had a thing,
You wanted to control me which wouldn’t happen
Because I see no ring.

You won’t get your way
Because you treated me bad,
We don’t even talk no more
And I ain’t even mad.


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on Oct. 14 2011 at 11:53 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

Your* sorry for typo

on Oct. 14 2011 at 11:52 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
11 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

You're stuff is really good. You should read some of mine! :)

on Jul. 2 2011 at 9:17 pm
Allis-in-Wonderland PLATINUM, Cartersville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes people leave you...halfway through The Wood. Do not let it grieve you...No one leaves for good. You are not alone, for no one is alone." -Into The Woods

LOVED the rhyme scheme! Very good!




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