Sun didn't shine

It was a dark day, need I say more.
Just the memory, sends shivers to the core.
You were there, and so was I.
Wonder what went so wrong..
Why the screaming?
Why the curses?
What happened to those love songs?
But I guess, some things are never meant to be.
And that's what they'll say, about you and me.





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AJFruitninja said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 12:06 pm
Yeah, at my school I'm the fruitninja! haha it's so cool right?! But I thought it was extremely good and you should keep writing!
 
AJFruitninja said...
Jul. 2, 2011 at 9:16 pm

it's NOT BAD! And don't say your work sucks! I thought It was very good!

 

 
GrangerDanger replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 5:58 am

Thankyou so much FruitNinja :D
This means alot to me! 

Getting complimented by a ninja xD I am SO motivated to write more :D

 
GrangerDanger said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 6:57 am
Some feedback, please :) 

And please check out my other poem too. This one's not too good, I know that. Wrote it after a bad day. Kinda autobiographical. :/
 
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