Oh, He Loved Me So

March 22, 2011
By Eliza93 BRONZE, Groesbeck, Texas
Eliza93 BRONZE, Groesbeck, Texas
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Love is a wine of which I first sipped
A couple of million of summers ago.
He held my hand to his lips,
Oh, he loved me so.

Then I jumped miles,
My heart quickly soared
For the boy with the smile
Just the next door.

Love at first is sweet you know,
Hand-holding and precious kisses all!
Lord! He loved me so.
I didn’t know I was just another doll.

There were others you see,
Others he held and kissed,
Going about so happily,
His treachery we missed.

It was a couple of million of summers ago,
And yet, I still think-
Oh, he loved me so,
For his mark is darker than ink.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Apr. 24 2011 at 7:41 am
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

Oh! I love it. It would seem to me one would have to have a great understanding of self to write a poem such as this.

michies2007 said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 1:09 pm
It's a tad dark, but I love it! reminds me of that song strawberry wine kinda...bittersweet and everything

mark_13 said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 1:07 pm

Very good form. I like this a lot.


renee@ryder said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 1:06 pm
This poem reminds me of my first boyfriend....this REALLY connected with me:)


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