January 27, 2011
By ShadowDancer GOLD, Spokane, Washington
ShadowDancer GOLD, Spokane, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead- Benjamin Franklin

Shadows drift all around me,
Imagining, that someone’s found me,
Memories that are incased within,
Stay with me, through thick and thin.

My family’s photo I hold on to tight,
I know I won’t give up this fight,
A light above me flickers through,
And hope within me is renewed.

My eyes squeezed shut, my thoughts adrift,
As I’m slowly, being lift,
The hope inside me sparks to life,
As I calmly cease to fight,
My faith in miracles, has come through,
As t realize, I’ve been rescued.

The author's comments:
This is a poem for the people who got stuck in the mione and were trapped there for days.

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on Apr. 24 2012 at 7:55 pm
Ashley_Tucker, Granger, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real? ~ Albus Dumbledore

I really like this one, too! The beginning is really beautiful. And the middle, okay the whole thing is great! Spelling error in the last line. I'd maybe think of an alternative for As I'm slowly being lift. It's okay...but push yourself to do your best!


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