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Spill Your Blood With Mine, Dearest

My hands are shaking,

My heart is breaking,

You're taking the best of me.



My lips quiver,

My body shivers,

Come on and take the lead.



I want this here,

I want it now,

So tell me what to do.



I'll be the girl,

To rock your world,

If you say you're in, too.



I've never been

The one to win,

So come on, let's break that stride.



I love you, dear,

So please come near,

We'll run away and hide.



Words that flood

The tip of my tongue,

Words so pure and sweet.



I promise you with my heart,

I'll never want to part,

From the moment that we meet.



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MyConstRuctd_IdentiTyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:53 pm:
I just can't get over the simplicity of the style that you use in your poems. It's beautiful, yet original in its own way, and I know it would never work for me. I just can't do it. I hope you continue to write. :)
 
Babylufin replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 8:05 pm :
Why, thank you!! I just started writing poetry...and, frankly, I love it. It's raw...passionate. Tells a story with depth. Thank you so much for the comment/compliment! I don't think I could ever stop writing, even if I wanted to! I'm so glad you liked it!
 
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