mother mother

January 4, 2011
By bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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You left me here, on my own, not around to help me grow, to teach me things a girl should know, you left when I was very young, but you taught me to sing the songs I’ve sung, you taught me not to just walk to run, and when im in the dark to find the sun. When I think of you, I think of happiness, I think of peace, a life with no war, I just can’t wait to see you again, when god opens the door


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LunaLives GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 9:40 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

That makes me think of my mom, exept shes not dead just really far away. 5 stars. Check out my work.Ithink you would like it.

on Jan. 15 2011 at 7:38 pm
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

simply relatable tanx

on Jan. 15 2011 at 3:54 pm
HisPurePrincess ELITE, Flemington, New Jersey
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totally awesome, i really liked it.  it's cool.

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 12:21 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
16 articles 5 photos 219 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live

i know your mom is really proud of you too

Alasia said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 11:21 am
Alasia, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Don't follow a path, make your own, and leave a trail.

this is a wonderful poem.

bjmcrank GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 10:31 am
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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im very sorry..   and goodluck  everything you do. im sure your father is very proud of you.  my mother was an emt she also worked for the court house, going to nursing homes and stuff to make sure the people were being treated right.

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 7:54 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live

my dad was murdered he was a police officer

bjmcrank GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 7:04 pm
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
11 articles 10 photos 14 comments
thank you.. i miss my mother dearly..  i know she would be proud of me.. she always told me to do my best and that she would be proud of me in all i do. and what ever i chose to do in life she would support me.

bjmcrank GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 7:01 pm
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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thank you! i lost my mother 4 years ago she had ms ( mutiple sclerosis) i miss her so much.. she was really sick for a long time before she passed away.. but i know shes in a better place

lollypops GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 5:55 pm
lollypops GOLD, Pilot, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Live

wow this is really good i would say i know have you feel i have lost my dad but that wouldnt be true everyone deals with lost differently good luck in everything you do

on Jan. 14 2011 at 11:28 am
Alexandrathepoet PLATINUM, Leesville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If nothing else, believe in art.
~Unknown

This is very good, and I am very sorry for your loss. I guarantee your mom would be very proud of your talent. 

Swifty GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 5:52 pm
Swifty GOLD, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
'Unless you try to do something beyond what you have mastered, you will never grow.'













-C.R.Lawton

wow thats powerful. good job keep up the good work. if u can check some of mine out

bjmcrank GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 1:52 pm
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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thanks so much :)

on Jan. 13 2011 at 1:40 pm
neverserious GOLD, Hadley, Pennsylvania
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FOOTBALL AND BASKETTBALL PLAYERS THROW BALLZ...BUT CHEERLEADERZ THROW PEOPLE! -KATE MACCAN

u r incredible :]

bjmcrank GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 1:15 pm
bjmcrank GOLD, Dayton, Ohio
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thank you so much! :D

uhilu25 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 13 2011 at 1:13 pm
uhilu25 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
i am not bound to win,but i am bound to be true.i am not bound to succeed,but bound to live up to what light i have. -abraham lincon

this is AMAXING! keep writing!


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