when all hope is lost

January 4, 2011
Walking around in the middle of the night. In the darkness cant find the light, . I feel alone, yet I still put up a fight, I refuse to let them see my fright. I watch the darkness sweeping in.. once it comes its gone again, its been so long I don’t know were to begin, when I cant hide the pain I begin to weep, I hear your voice and open my eyes just for a peep. I start to smile and take a leap. For once, I have no reason to seep….

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FireandWater This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 3:53 pm
really interesting, i enjoyed it.  had an cool rhythm to it too.  good job!
LaShay_25 said...
Jan. 14, 2011 at 1:36 pm
i like ur poem cause it sounds so natural and the raw true emotions are shown =]
MissLynn said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 9:01 am
I love that leap of hope at the end. Happy endings rock.
jasmine101 said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 2:57 am

its sad and hold lots of emotions

i like it because it seems so pure


blackrose326 replied...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 12:19 pm
Great work! it hit a hard spot in my heart. Def. touching Good Job:)
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