Wouldn't it be beautiful (if you believed it?)

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If fairies and pixie dust
Could make you fly?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If happy endings emerged
Out of fairy tales?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If knights in shining armor
Really came to the rescue?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If Santa Clause brought presents
On every Christmas Eve?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If perfect was a thing that
Could really be achieved?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If love could be
Unending?

Wouldn’t it be beautiful
If you believed it?





Join the Discussion

This article has 7 comments. Post your own now!

LoudDreamer said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:17 pm

Santa Claus DOSEN'T deliver presents on Christmas Eve?????????? I REFUSE TO BELIEVE THAT!!!!(Nah, Im joking.)

This is a very beautifly poem. You know, It just occered to me that some of those things could be possible if we believed they were, perfection(in somethings), unending love, Knights in shining armor (as long as we don't literally expect armor). It really gave me food for thought. Great job.

 
bubbles.. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 7:25 am
i cried when i read this! very nice.
 
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 7:42 am
I love this!!!  The questions that you incorperated were truely amazing.
 
timeformetofly7 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 10:51 pm
:)))) i loved the beginning especially... though i think u coulda ended this differently somehow, but still, it was nice! the whole thing was pretty ^^
 
Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 3:13 pm
i like the question at the end of each verse, it makes it more personal i think. I only have one thing i didn't really like and that was at the end instead of ''If you believed it'' i think it could be better if it was just ''if you believed'' but thats your deicison and its really good anyway!! :)
 
Coffee replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:39 pm
I think this is my favorite of your poems. It's good. :):) 5 stars
 
Honor-And-Courage replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 1:09 pm
I love the poem. You should read, rate and comment on them.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback