May You Always Sing

November 18, 2010
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Oh, sing we do,
if sing we must,
and sing we always will.
May storms blow through
and wind bring gusts,
and we will sing on still.

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OfficialApprover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 7:23 pm
I adore poems like this:) I generally try to have some critiques in my comments, something to be improved, but with something as short and perfect as this I have nothing to suggest:P  The rhythm and rhyme were right on, and your word choice was lovely. I hope this gets put in the magazine:)
rachelnicole1257 said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 7:22 pm
This is one of those really small, simple poems that says so much more than you would expect. It speaks volumes!
NonsensicalMuse replied...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 10:05 am
So small yet so expressive-going in my favorites!!
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