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you aren’t what i expected
you aren’t what i perceived
you came undetected
but now i really see

you aren’t what i dreamed about
you aren’t what i wished to have
you’re different than the others
not nearly as bad

you don’t have any issues
you’re pretty much all there
you don’t really abuse
but I can’t help but stare

you never lie to me
you treat me like a queen
you say you’d die for me
though i don’t always know what you mean

you weren’t what i expected
you weren’t what i perceived
you came undetected
but now i really see…



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ohxXxEkkoxXx said...
Dec. 17, 2010 at 5:37 pm:
Thanks a lot! I love when people see other things than I did when I wrote it :]
 
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Dec. 16, 2010 at 5:39 pm:
when i read this i see an accidental human guardian angle in my head. i really like the rhyme and rythem.
 
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