I Can Remember... Can You?

November 5, 2010
Remember the times we would ride our bikes? Or the time you fell to the ground?
Remember the times I was at your house, or when we were on the merry-go-round?
Remember the times when we were six, and we were caught playing in the dirt?
Remember the times you confessed your love? With you, I never was hurt.
Remember the times we sat in your room, thinking of things to do?
Remember the times we told all our secrets, or the silence when I would glance at you?
Remember the times we hosed ourselves down, 'cause we decided to climb that hill?
Remember the times we saw eachother less, but even so, I missed you still?
Remember the times you gave me "that look"? I remember it, you were such a tease.
Remember the times when we would reunite, and tie the memories?
Remember that day when you asked me out... but I was too afraid of love?
Remember that day when I finally left? It wasn't the dream I planned to walk out of.

Remember that day you gave me your look, and you took my hand and whispered low.
Remember that feeling when you read my heart and said, "This time I won't let you go."

I remember the times on our bikes. I remember being with you.
I remember the age of six, seven, eight, nine. The ages when love was all we knew.
How could you recognize love at such a young age? It's always puzzled my mind.
I remember now, that when we were young, you could see, but I was blind.

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SMWells said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 1:47 pm
I already thought the poem was good before I was halfway through. But the ending was what impresed me. Is was so unexpected. And yet it fit in so well. It gave the poem real meaning. I will read the evrything you have sent in. and your on my email when this person contributes list.
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 12:56 pm
thankyou (: 
S M Wells replied...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 2:56 pm
Oh don't bother. I should thank you for sharing the poem.
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 6:59 pm
if you insist (: 
S M Wells replied...
Jan. 3, 2011 at 7:59 pm
I insist. But I was wandering... why did you chose the sceen name you did?
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 8:03 am
not sure. its pretty much my screen name for everything i guess. (:
kmarie14 said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 12:12 am
ok this peom is beautiful I love it all the way through..(: such a beautiful story of love and I really like all the memories at the beginging ! :) love love love this peom! FIVE STARSSS !!! :) A.maze.ing. :) ok i think you get the point ;) check out my work? would love to hear your opinion
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 1:33 pm
thank you a ton! that was a very excited commment but i appreciate it so much! i'll be sure to check out your work soon. (: thanks
soccer_lover101 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 6:29 pm
This is amazing Your should check out my stuff when it gets more approved
CountryGothic said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 12:25 pm
Astounding poem! I am definetely adding this to my favorites, the story it tells is so beautiful and sad and sweet all in one, wonderfully written!
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 9:46 pm
aw, thankyou, that means a lot!
ShelbyLynn12 said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 12:23 pm
omg i love this!you're an amazing writer :)
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Jan. 4, 2011 at 6:46 pm
gracias (: 
nancyyy said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 7:55 am
The rhyme isn't forced and flows so nicely. It's an incredible poem that tells a story, plus it has a happy ending. I like it. :)
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 9:46 pm
exactly what i was going for. (: thanks
Karamel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 9:52 pm
Your poem is so fantastically romantic. I can see every line as I read them. And you're really lucky to have a guy like him. :)
Tomorrow said...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 9:17 pm

I know how you feel, I don't publish all of what i write but check it out sometimes it helps to relate to what others are going through, i know it helps me. 

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ayoder said...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 8:31 pm
This poem was really inspiring. I love how you rhymed each line, but it still made sense. Not many poets can pull that off.
ekmlovesmusic replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 9:05 pm
thankyou so much (:
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