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Don’t mind my vacant, flustered, fuddled stare,
I’m like this because minds do roam afar,
When they’re witness to your blissfully rare
Pair of wane eyes; how they resemble stars.
God, how they shine, surpassing all others,
Glistening, glittering, glad fully bright.
How they passed before, my brain now wonders,
And yet a wonder I behold each night.
Every morning I wake, captivated,
Alive from the sunlight through my window,
Reminded of a soul now agitated,
Dying as I wait for your shadow.
And while the sun blinds, your stars glow golden,
Our full, enamored stare, eyes wide open.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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Rebel21This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 23 at 7:21 pm
Very beautiful, made me think
 
gisoul said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 6:28 am
great job . keep it up
 
HateKnuckle said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 8:36 pm
I didn't like the idea of staring at stars but I do like the idea of thinking of someone that is gone and remembering him/her. Words are great and flow is good. 5 stars. 
 
Kaninchen said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:39 pm
Marvelous.  The imagery is there. 
 
sparkofheart said...
May 6, 2010 at 5:26 pm
wow really pretty!! loved the description and imagery! keep it up :)
 
Andreww said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 5:55 pm
beautifully written... i like it alot :D
 
kpf1991 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:12 pm
Hey could you check out "anguish" or "They see through me" and rate it or just let know what you think? you have great talent and i'd really appreciate your input
 
xomolls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 6:40 pm
You keep the rhythm constantly and provide rich imagery in each line. I love this.
 
Dominic S. said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 3:59 am
reppin the kentucky block!!!!
 
ChristiansGirl said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 4:03 am
omg this says everything about my boyfriend. it is sweet and great like him.
 
saml2009 said...
Sept. 28, 2008 at 2:01 am
your writing reminds of poetry written in the late 1800's and early 1900's
 
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