Beautiful

July 9, 2010
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"


Do you think I'm pretty?

I'm definitely no Megan Fox

Maybe I act too witty

like I live outside the box.



Maybe I'm nothing more than mediocre

forever rated PG.

It's not like I'm some smoker

just regular old me.


Constantly on my period

acting like such a you-know-what

like the number myriad

I'm always such a nut.


I want you to like me so much

and not be "just a friend",

to feel that warm, loving touch

and not just play pretend.


The author's comments:
took me for-ev to write this. this is a piece of my heart i hope u treat it well.

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on Sep. 21 2010 at 8:49 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

y thank you! :D

on Sep. 20 2010 at 9:46 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

good sayin'

on Aug. 23 2010 at 9:14 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

well, all of us make mistakes, right? learn and move on. that's what I say. :D

on Aug. 23 2010 at 7:51 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

thatz fine XD

on Aug. 20 2010 at 7:09 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

oh, my baad! :S i see that was the name of the photgrapher....duh.

on Aug. 19 2010 at 9:24 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

thnx so much!!! but my name's Ashley

on Aug. 16 2010 at 8:31 am
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

This is a very pretty poem, susan. I really like it. Please continue to write more. :)




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