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Forgive Me?

The words spit out of my mouth,
Sending this feeling of sorrow and regret throughout my body
I can see the tears form around your eyes,
I waited to hear what you were going to say
I waited for a few more minutes, waiting for the yelling to begin,
But no words came from your mouth
The tears that flowed down your cheeks,
Made me start to tear
We stare at each other, in the of the hallway we stand,
The bell rang but we didn’t move
I stared right into your baby blue eyes,
And your saddened eyes stare right back at me
I was speechless and clueless to what I have done,
I try to say that I was sorry and I didn’t mean it
Still speechless you stare at me,
The tears streaming down my face as I try to apologize
You're my one true friend,
and I never meant to hurt you.
You didn’t say one word, but you cry a river,
You stare at me, and then looked down
Without meeting my eyes once again,
You walked away
No more memories,
No more smiles,
No more us
I was standing there with my face covered in tears
Watching you walk away,
I regret every word spoken that day
Goodbye I whisper before turning away.





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nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 4:51 pm
So much emotion.  Very good.
 
SashaLovesYOux3 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 11:00 pm
thank you very much for your kind comment :D
 
jessi said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:42 pm

Wow. That was amazingly great, I can totally relate to that. Awesome job, keep writing! :]

Evanescence is amazing! xD

 
SashaLovesYOux3 replied...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 3:20 pm

thank you for the comment i really apperciate it :)

i love writing so i will keep writing feel free to read my other poems that i added to teen ink :)

&& i know I'm addicted to Evanescence && Amy Lee <3

 
jessi replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 12:20 am

no prob! that was really awesome.

i'll have to do that! not tonight, because my mom's about to ground me if i dont get off, but i shall soon! :]

I love lithium and hello, i havent heard alot of amy lee though. might have to listen to her while reading your poems! xD

 

 
SashaLovesYOux3 replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:19 am

:)

Okay lol

xD I really can't pick one or two favorite songs i LOVE all their songs :)

i know i miss amy  ubt i hear a new album is coming out soon enough :)

 
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