My Best Friend Saved My Life

May 21, 2010
If you don't have friendship,
you don't have a life
Before I met her,
I came close with a knife

I thought i was worthless,
no more than dirt
But she made me realize,
how much i was worth

She said it wasn't healthy,
to cut deep in my skin
She said that i shouldn't,
keep it all bottled in

She made me feel good and proud of myself,
She stopped me from harming and even killing myself

Because of her,
I put down the knife
My best friend Carleen,
she saved my life

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Animatrix said...
Nov. 22, 2013 at 4:50 pm
It was good. I am glad that you had your friend Carleen. We all need a Carleen in our lives.
yellowflower said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 4:40 pm
wow.. rlly good! i love how the poem flowed! And the message i think a lot of people don't see how important their friends are.
JackLynn replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 4:53 pm
thank you so much im glad you liked it :)
iWriteToExpressThouqhts said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 3:40 pm
That is so sweet and shows how much of a true friend she is and how much she cares about you . Many people aren't blessed with true friends , so your more than lucky to have a friend like that :) Please comment and rate my work :)
JackLynn replied...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 4:54 pm
thank you for commenting and yes she is a great friend. i'll be sure to check out you're work.
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