If I Could I Would

May 17, 2010
By softball6 PLATINUM, Humansville, Missouri
softball6 PLATINUM, Humansville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
*^^^LET DREAMS FLY, BEFORE THEY DIE^^^*---sarah brothers


If I could create a meadow
For us to sit upon
There, we'd sit together
From dusk until dawn

If I could catch a rainbow
I would do it just for you
And share with you it's beauty
On the days you're feeling blue

If I could build a mountain
You could call your very own
It would give you company
On the days you're all alone

I may not be able to creat a meadow
And catch a rainbow, too
But when you're feeling down
Remember, I am here for you


The author's comments:
This poem came to me when one of my friends were feeling down. I knew i really couldnt do or change anything that had happened, but i still wrote this just to make them feel better.

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on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:56 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

This is amazing!!! i love it so much-what a great way to send that message!!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!!

on Jun. 9 2010 at 4:26 pm
softball6 PLATINUM, Humansville, Missouri
33 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
*^^^LET DREAMS FLY, BEFORE THEY DIE^^^*---sarah brothers

thanks guys for the comments!! i love to write this kind of poetry

on Jun. 8 2010 at 10:08 pm
smiley_alley7 SILVER, Little Rock, Arkansas
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I love this! (:

on Jun. 8 2010 at 6:48 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

i like this sort of love poem, brotherly/ sisterly love. the world needs more poems like this:) 


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