On a Better Day

May 12, 2010
By erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two great days in a person's life, the day we are born and the day we discover why."


Your eyes close with pleasure,
you gave into the pressure.
You're free as a bird.
No more voices can be heard.
Just sink into the darkness;
let go of the hurt and the pain.
You can be light as a feather,
but you are far from clever.
You feel happy and joyful,
almost never remorseful.
I feel that enough for us two;
you had given me more than a clue.
Just sit back and relax,
laugh and play,
blaze all day.
I thought you had more of a brain,
but apparently weed was easier to obtain.
You could lose it all,
but somehow you don't care if you fall.
So just huff and puff,
blow your life away.
I'll talk to you on a better day.


The author's comments:
This piece is dedicated to someone I love very much. I hope they realize how much it hurts.

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on Jun. 23 2010 at 7:27 pm
erinXrose PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two great days in a person's life, the day we are born and the day we discover why."

Ya, but he's more than just a friend, he's family. :/

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:04 pm
AmyMarie BRONZE, Lakeville, Minnesota
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It's hard when friends do self-destructive things, I know. :(


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