Pained

May 8, 2010
By sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape


It's almost as if
When the pain sets in
That ice is pushing through me
Like sharp and lengthy pins

My blood turns into little ants
They're crawling in my veins
I press my face against the window
Where outside it silently rains

My head begins to pound
And my heart starts beating fast
This keeps on recurring
From my not-so-distant past

Shivers run down my spine
It chills me to the core
But the pain subsides quickly as it came
And I can't help but wish for more



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on Jul. 18 2010 at 1:21 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thanks!!!!

on Jul. 18 2010 at 8:00 am
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

oh wow i really like this one. espically the last line(: great job!

on Jul. 17 2010 at 3:51 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

wow thanks! and i will :)

CarolynQ GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2010 at 12:10 pm
CarolynQ GOLD, Manalapan, New Jersey
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Your last stanza is wonderful. It's a chilling and unique poem, that I happen to like a lot. Check some of my work out.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 10:33 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thanks! i've always kind of thought i was a little bit like edgar allen poe too...but i'll never be as amazing as him lol.

Jessip GOLD said...
on Jun. 20 2010 at 9:23 pm
Jessip GOLD, Minot, North Dakota
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Your darker writings almost remind me of Edgar Allen Poe except his writing is much more old fashioned, He's one of my favorites and you are turing into one of my favorites as well, I look forward to your writings you will do in the future.

on May. 30 2010 at 6:14 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

thanks a ton!

wondering GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 7:20 pm
wondering GOLD, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
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This is really good. I feel your emotions when I read your writing=]


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