May 8, 2010
It's almost as if
When the pain sets in
That ice is pushing through me
Like sharp and lengthy pins

My blood turns into little ants
They're crawling in my veins
I press my face against the window
Where outside it silently rains

My head begins to pound
And my heart starts beating fast
This keeps on recurring
From my not-so-distant past

Shivers run down my spine
It chills me to the core
But the pain subsides quickly as it came
And I can't help but wish for more

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pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 8:00 am
oh wow i really like this one. espically the last line(: great job!
sparkofheart replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 1:21 pm
CarolynQ said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 12:10 pm
Your last stanza is wonderful. It's a chilling and unique poem, that I happen to like a lot. Check some of my work out.
sparkofheart replied...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 3:51 pm
wow thanks! and i will :)
Jessiperk This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 9:23 pm
Your darker writings almost remind me of Edgar Allen Poe except his writing is much more old fashioned, He's one of my favorites and you are turing into one of my favorites as well, I look forward to your writings you will do in the future.
sparkofheart replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 10:33 pm
thanks! i've always kind of thought i was a little bit like edgar allen poe too...but i'll never be as amazing as him lol.
wondering said...
May 28, 2010 at 7:20 pm
This is really good. I feel your emotions when I read your writing=]
sparkofheart replied...
May 30, 2010 at 6:14 pm
thanks a ton!
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