Roses are Red

April 19, 2010
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Roses are red
But your heart is certainly black
How could you even think to cheat
Behind her back
She was so good to you
Never letting the love slack
But you let her go
With a painful whack
She deserves the best
Something you surely lack
I hope you fall off a cliff
Or step on a tack
And fall on your face
With a defiant smack
Or get lost in the jungle
And become a predator's snack
Cause while roses may be red
Your heart is certainly black





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***Rain*** said...
May 11, 2010 at 4:09 pm
Awesome! I love it! Five stars. :)  I would really appreciate it if you read some of my work. That would be even more amazing. No it wouldnt be more amazing than your work. I lied. Please rate and commemt on some of my things! Thanx! Keep writing! :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
May 11, 2010 at 9:49 am
haha cute (: it has good rhyming, and i can tell your mad in this poem, but you don't express it in a vicious way (: really good job here. would you mind commenting on some of my work? (:
 
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