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A high school heart break movie

April 20, 2010
By Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts


It was like watching a movie
To which you already know the end
Where the football wannabe
Turns out to be a really bad boyfriend
And you wanna save the girl next door
From going through that pain
But you know your efforts
Will only end up in vain

She’s never gonna listen
You’ve tried everything you can
To try to tell her that her boyfriend
Is not a Hollywood leading man
He is just gonna hurt her
You knew that from the start
Yet you have to sit by
And watch him break her heart

Still you can’t turn off the movie
So you keep her in your mind
Because not that long ago you too
Were locked in his controlling bind
It kills you to watch it
But you can’t just go astray
You want to be there to help
When she decides to breaks away

You know there’s nothing you can do
But wait till she can see
That the man of her dreams
Is not what he seems to be
And you wish you could rewind time
To make her believe the things you said
That way you could reverse
All the tears she had to shed



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on May. 11 2010 at 8:53 pm
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

Thank you both! Its great knowing that people can relate to what I write and that it captures the emotion that I was trying to send out!

on May. 11 2010 at 4:25 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

Oh my gosh! Love it! Five stars! :) Im going through something along t eh lines of this and you captured those feelings and put them into an amazing poem. Would you please read some of my things? That would be awesome if you did. Keep writing such amazing poems. :)

on May. 11 2010 at 9:46 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

ooops, i meant i CAN relate (:

on May. 11 2010 at 9:46 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow (: this is amazing!! the rhythm and flow is like 100% perfect. and the poem is so sweet. and it's so true! i cant relate. i like all of the emotion you put into this. it's honestly amazing (: 5 stars! would you mind checking out some of my work and commenting? keep writing (: