This strange little feeling

I'm falling again,
That I can't conceal,
I just can't explain,
These feelings I feel.

They build up inside me,
A strange kinda power,
The kind you can't see,
But inside it devours.

And when I see you,
It explodes full force,
I don't know what to do,
But I know you're the source.

I'm going to name this feeling I own,
With a name that shines above,
Not a detail to be condoned,
i think I'll call it love.





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bkcrider92 said...
May 14, 2010 at 4:20 pm
This is just amazing! Absolutely loved it! If you could can you look at my poems Memories and My First Love? If you can comment and rate them that would be great! You're very talented =D
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 14, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Thanks soo much! I will indeed. thanks for the compliment ! xD  
 
***Rain*** said...
May 10, 2010 at 5:41 pm
I love it! Its amazing and easy to relate to! Keep on writing. I would love for you to rate and comment on some of my writings. Please? That would be amazing if a writer of your caliber did that. Thanks and keep writing! :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 11, 2010 at 9:27 pm
Thanks soo much! I will most defiantly comment on your stuff! "  a writer of your caliber" ahah thanks !! xD  
 
***Rain*** replied...
May 12, 2010 at 3:37 pm
No. Thank you. :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 12, 2010 at 3:38 pm
you're very welcome (:
 
dreamer_believer said...
May 9, 2010 at 5:22 pm
aahhh i love it!! :) this is sooo great! it's cute and really honest. i can relate :) awesome job!! would you mind commenting on some of my work please? thanks and keep writing!! :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 9, 2010 at 7:59 pm

Thanks sooo much ! I wrote it hoping people could relate ! it's alot of honesty (: 

Thanks again ! xD & i will comment & keep writing , thanks ! (: 

 
Kristen M. said...
May 6, 2010 at 5:29 pm

YOU'RE SOOO GOOOOD (:

love it. <3

 
insaneprincess replied...
May 6, 2010 at 5:30 pm

THANKS SO MUCH ! 

love you <3 ;D 

 
Kairah J. said...
May 6, 2010 at 2:01 pm
AMAZING!!!! AS ALWAYS, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL :)
 
insaneprincess replied...
May 6, 2010 at 2:11 pm

Thanks sooo much ! :)

you are amazing ;D

 
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