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All My Love

By , commack, NY
Can you see the hurt in my eyes?
all the tears that have ran down my face, are all for you.
the amount of tears that i have shed last night, are enough to fill an olymic size pool.
you will never truly see how i feel.
i would have never thought that you would do somthing like that.
the act you put on, the spell i fell under.
i thought u weren't like the others.
i thought you could be the one that was different.
but i guess i was wrong about you.
for those words that you wrote to her. are burned in my mind for today, for tonight and for the rest of my life.





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WritingLoverForever said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 5:46 pm
Oh my word, this is sooooooo incredibly sad! So beautiful, but so sad! This almost brought tears to my eyes because it's exactly how I felt about my first love. You are amazing, and PLEASE keep writing. By the way, would you mind checking out some of my work, please?
 
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