Welcome to Nature

March 18, 2010
By CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
26 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Cool breeze, what a gift,
Flowers dance, sway, and shitft,
By the touch of the flowers, such fragility,
Brings me joy, and much tranquility,
Drip, drip, slides the rain,
Refreshed flowers bright and tame,
Oh joy, a caterpillar squirms,
Riding along, just like a germ,
Welcome to nature, there are no limits,
Lay down now, on the vert grass, take a sit,
Fresh air, take a breath, so pure,
This is surely mother-nature


The author's comments:
Don't you just love laying down in the grass, surrounded by the sounds of nature. The dragonflys, flowers, trees, it's all so breathtaking. Enjoy it, both the poem and nature.

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Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 2 2010 at 12:32 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

I like the poem the sweet simplicity of it and i like how it rhymes... but it needs more. It needs to envolve into a bigger idea a connection... To go deeper what is so beautiful about nature not just the physical features, the appearances, but why is it so lovable. Again i believe the poem is good but u wanted critism




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