Welcome to Nature

March 18, 2010
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Cool breeze, what a gift,
Flowers dance, sway, and shitft,
By the touch of the flowers, such fragility,
Brings me joy, and much tranquility,
Drip, drip, slides the rain,
Refreshed flowers bright and tame,
Oh joy, a caterpillar squirms,
Riding along, just like a germ,
Welcome to nature, there are no limits,
Lay down now, on the vert grass, take a sit,
Fresh air, take a breath, so pure,
This is surely mother-nature

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Miseltoe said...
May 2, 2010 at 12:32 pm
I like the poem the sweet simplicity of it and i like how it rhymes... but it needs more. It needs to envolve into a bigger idea a connection... To go deeper what is so beautiful about nature not just the physical features, the appearances, but why is it so lovable. Again i believe the poem is good but u wanted critism
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