What You've Done To Me

March 12, 2010
By Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
148 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am Happy to The Point of Fear" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson


I feel a pang inside my heart,
Whenever you walk by,
But unlike those before you,
it doesnt make me want to cry,

It makes my heart melt and my head spin,
As the birds sing all your praises,
First i shied, and then pursued,
Oh boy you put me through the phases.

And now the sun
is shining once again,
For the very first time
My smiles may have no end,

Im seeing the blue blue side,
of a life I tried to hide,
not the blues that are hues of a bruise,
but the color of a baby's eyes,

You cause me to sing to the mountains,
Even though I know they wont hear,
You gave me my wings to show the birds,
They arent the only ones without fear,

I will rise to the sun
And show him that you shine brighter than he...!
The days have become a dream,
Ever since you stayed with me.



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on Mar. 30 2010 at 9:30 am
Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
148 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am Happy to The Point of Fear" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson

Thank you, I am glad to hear that it is relatable! i will definately look at some of your work!

on Mar. 30 2010 at 9:29 am
Lucy4himnotu ELITE, Richardson, Texas
148 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am Happy to The Point of Fear" -Ralph Waldo Emmerson

I would love to read some of yours! Thank you so much for the feedback :) thats one of my fave lines as well :)

on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:53 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

love it :) it's creative and very romantic, but not sappy. it's deep and very sweet :) i love "you cause me to sing to the mountains even though I know they won't hear". that's an awesome line! :) bravo on the poem...5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work please?




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