Bratty Betrayal

March 12, 2010
By Anonymous

I wait out on the street for you,
so we can walk hand in hand,
I find the perfect day for us,
to eat ice-cream on the sand,
I help you with your homework because I know you're not that smart,
I tell you that I love you,
and that you belong in my heart,
I let you show me off to your friends,
like I'm your personal show,
but now you've really done something,
which reaches an all time low,
I've always, always cared for you,
but I just dont understand,
how you can push me away like that,
like I am the ugliest in the land,
I don't care that you dumped me,
I don't care that you're a jerk,
But this news didn't just rub me the wrong way,
but it made my ears perk,
To know how much of a creep you are,
I never thought you were a rat,
but now I know how dumb you are,
because you dumped me for a brat.

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on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:51 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

LOVE IT!!! i can realte so well to this poem. you did a great job making everything clear and so rhythmic to the reader :) it's brilliant! 5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work please?

on Mar. 27 2010 at 1:31 am
lucy.wolf BRONZE, Melbourne, Other
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I've been in a situation exactly like this! I was dumped for a girl who acted like a totaly spoiled princess!

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