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Notice Me

By , Maple hts, OH
He's standing right there
He doesn't notice me.
I just don't think it's fair,
Why does he ignore me?

"Maybe he's shy?" I say to myself.
Its been forever since he spoke a word.
Maybe he's seeing someone else,
I guess im not 'that girl'


He drives me crazy, day and night.
I wonder if he knows what I go though.
He's just one perfect sight,
I'm just lucky to have met you

I think I must have fallin' for you,
Over and over and over again.
How many days must I go through?
How many days do I have to complain?

Just say hi!
Just notice me
You don't know how happy that would make me.


Maybe he's waiting for me,
Waiting for me to make the first move.
I don't know what I would do.
Maybe I could just act cool!
Wow...that would not work
haha!

Boy....do you know what you do to me?
You are like a headache that won't go away!
But its the good kind!
Just please notice me.
Why am I feeling this way?
Just please notice me.

Maybe you're this word,
Yup! That word,
I know you know it,
You are my CRUSH!



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PrincessSparkleStar said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 9:48 am:
AH i love this poem so much!!!! It's like my current story! Please read my poem, "Remember that day?" It's sort of like what we hope will be our future stories:)
 
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russianreader said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 7:26 pm:
i loved it...very realistic
 
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nikkigonefishin said...
Sept. 24, 2010 at 10:58 pm:

OMG i LOVE this poem its BEAUTIFUL !!! wat i like most is that i can really relate to it. its like you wrote about exactly wat i go thru. its a great poem plz cont. writing !

:) I LOVE IT !!!!!

 
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Melanie_H said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 11:58 am:
I love it! Good job!!
 
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enchanted4yu said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 2:15 am:
This is very unique! Your style of writing is cool and I like the the topic =)
 
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