When she said 'no'

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Never be sad never feel down
Never let your face to frown
As someone is there to take away your sorrow
And ensure you are happy today and tomorrow
Even though you can’t be his friend or anything above,
He always stands for you with the same heart and the same love.
He expects nothing but ‘at least return him who you were
Because hating someone for his love is neither wise nor fair.
You washed all his friendship when you knew he loves you
Because you thought his friendship was pre planned, just to achieve you.
But he was your friend when he behaved as such
And when it changed, he expressed without thinking much.
As he didn’t wanted to fabricate nor wanted to find you obsessed
And time has paused for the moment he expressed.
He assures you, just give him a try
And you will be glad that you avoided a lifelong cry…





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JustAlice? said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 4:37 pm
ha ha i really liked it but the whole time i was so confused by the title, then i scrolled down and read you changed the title lol. anyways i love it its really good!
 
JayRaj replied...
Apr. 10, 2010 at 12:00 am

Yeah! Actually the poem was untitled when I submitted so I titled what first came in my mind! 

N thanks a lot!! :-)

 
hits said...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 10:18 am
its nice poem.it really tou
 
JayRaj replied...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 12:36 pm
Thanks buddy!!
 
JayRaj said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 9:02 am
I had to announce that the title of the poem has been now changed.
The new one is "To My Angel"
 
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