all the lies and pain

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i always stopped and asked my self
why i fell for you
when you went and broke my heart
even though you said you love me 2
i hate how badly i miss you
i hate how badly i care
i hate that all you really do
is simply stand and stare
you say you really love me
you say you don't pretend
So why is all you tell me
all of it just depends
On how much you relly love her
Can i ask you was she worth it?
What's the point anymore
You don't really give a s***!
You say you relly love me
You say you relly care
So why is all you do
Is simply stand and stare





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TabbyIsland said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 7:24 pm
Your poem is really strong and while reading it I could feel the emotion you put into it. It's really good!!!
 
Ashlen replied...
May 8, 2010 at 5:55 pm
thanks so much i think i have given up on writing poems though. After the pain i went through with the guy i thought was perfect i don't think i could ever write again. He made me choose between writing and him and i chose him and then he dumped me and went out with my best friend so i think i'm giving up on writing
 
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