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to meet a guy so perfect
seems too good to be true
you walk into my life
my sky turns a brighter blue

grass looks a little greener
stars shine brighter at night
the magic when your eyes meet yours
makes life less black and white

my life was like an outline
of tears, sore hearts and sorrys
til you came with an eraser
and rewrote a better story

you can make me crack a smile
with just the way you say my name
the shivers you send up my spine
put other boys to shame

you kiss my neck, you love my nose
you put me at my best
i touch your face, and bite your lip
rest my head against your chest

holding hands in silence
swearing that we'll never lie
i have a growing confidence
youll be the last to make me cry

friends tell me that they're jealous
my face carries a new glow
but the way im feeling inside
is something that they'll never know

the feelings indescribable
my skys a brighter blue
i think that sort of, possibly
i could be falling for you.





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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:27 am
I love this, especially the last two lines. It's really sweet. The rhythm of the poem was also fantastic, and it flowed flawlessly.
 
delaneys replied...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 11:56 pm
thanks alot :)
 
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