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a guy so perfect

February 23, 2010
By delaneys GOLD, Dundas, Other
delaneys GOLD, Dundas, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter makes you young, love makes you beautiful.


to meet a guy so perfect
seems too good to be true
you walk into my life
my sky turns a brighter blue

grass looks a little greener
stars shine brighter at night
the magic when your eyes meet yours
makes life less black and white

my life was like an outline
of tears, sore hearts and sorrys
til you came with an eraser
and rewrote a better story

you can make me crack a smile
with just the way you say my name
the shivers you send up my spine
put other boys to shame

you kiss my neck, you love my nose
you put me at my best
i touch your face, and bite your lip
rest my head against your chest

holding hands in silence
swearing that we'll never lie
i have a growing confidence
youll be the last to make me cry

friends tell me that they're jealous
my face carries a new glow
but the way im feeling inside
is something that they'll never know

the feelings indescribable
my skys a brighter blue
i think that sort of, possibly
i could be falling for you.



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delaneys GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 11:56 pm
delaneys GOLD, Dundas, Other
11 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Laughter makes you young, love makes you beautiful.

thanks alot :)

on Mar. 4 2010 at 5:27 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

I love this, especially the last two lines. It's really sweet. The rhythm of the poem was also fantastic, and it flowed flawlessly.