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the falcon

my love for him
and his of me
bound us together for eternity.

a love so strong
it cannot die
will stay forever
like wind and sky.

but once upon a dreary night
the evil falcon flies
stole my precious love away
caught up in all its lies

I guess i was wrong
for it wasn't me to be
as really good as this
just for him and me.

but as for you and your only
you better watch the skies.
for right below the heavens
an evil falcon flies.




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***Rain*** said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 4:17 pm:
Wow. This is amazing. Keep writing!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 12:50 pm:
LOVE it!! i love how you used the "evil falcon" as the thing that can break two people apart...very creative! i like all the emotion and heartbreak you captured in this poem :) this is for sure one of my very favorite pieces on the site! 5 stars all the way my friend...BRAVO! :) would you mind checking out some of my work? id love the feedback. thanks, and keep writing :) :)
 
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