Restore What Is No More

January 31, 2010
By Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
39 articles 1 photo 46 comments

Bird, oh bird
So sweet with sound
Fly high up in the sky
Until my lost love is found

Rain, cold rain
Refreshing my troubled mind
Flow over rocks and grass
Until the one i love, you find

Tree, strong secure tree
Stretch your branches all around
Wrap him warm up in your leaves,
Safely releasing him to the ground

Love, dear love
For once I set you free
I was sure you were true
And would come back to me

Time, old time
Please go back to before
So that i can mend
this heart in which i tore


The author's comments:
I really LOVE this poem... I feel as if I should have written it in the 1800's.

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Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 8:10 pm
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
39 articles 1 photo 46 comments
aww thankyou.... this one is probably my favorite.

on Jun. 3 2010 at 11:19 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

ee i like this poem ^_^ its sooo awesome nd i like ur rhymes

Bobbi PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 8:24 pm
Bobbi PLATINUM, Terry, Mississippi
39 articles 1 photo 46 comments
thank you so much... and i will. I'm sure you are an amazing writter.

on Feb. 14 2010 at 12:29 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

amazing! :) :) i really don't know what else to say about this....the rhyming is great, the flow is perfect. and it's such a deep, meaningful poem. i can literally feel the emotion bursting from my computer screen :) i LOVE this piece. i can easily relate. whoa, im just speechless :) 5 stars!

check out some of my work if you could, i would love the feedback. oh, and keep writing :) :)


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