a female protagonist

January 9, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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As I seek to find a sword
I just don’t think of a likely storm
I know the good guys have it real bad
theres always a challenge for the young lad
I found a part of me in a rose
I took it back to see how it grows
it didn’t get enough water, didn’t get enough sunlight
like me when I was fighting evil in broad daylight
this seems like a story in an action-packed book
but truly ive been stolen by a cold-hearted crook
hands tied together above my head
"You'll never get out" someone had said
the walls were painted as black coffee
I swore someone yelled my name out from the lobby
oh
did I mention, that i'm working for men
oh
I must have rested my eyes again



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on May. 11 2010 at 3:59 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
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I'm glad you have joined our organization....

on May. 10 2010 at 9:36 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Ha! you get me so well! You reeled me in ,...aha im official a fan!

on May. 10 2010 at 9:24 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is very nice-" I know the good guys have it real bad"-"fighting evil in broad daylight"-"I must have rested my eyes again"-very nice- gotta love it :)

on May. 1 2010 at 9:33 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Nessa(:!,

thankss you!!


nessalozano said...
on May. 1 2010 at 2:10 pm
This one is my favorite!

on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:42 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Exactly! this isn't a straight-foward poem, so im glad you get it. Thank you so much.

on Apr. 27 2010 at 6:26 am
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten." ~unknown

Woah. This is good! I love the underlying meaning of the strength required  to be a woman in a male dominated world.

on Feb. 7 2010 at 12:25 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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aww thanks.. and i need some constructive critism since im a newbee

but i will definantly keep writing:)

on Feb. 7 2010 at 9:14 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

WOW!!!

I don't quite get the idea in this, but i'm sure if I did i'll tell you that this piece

IS REALLY POWERFUL. I enjoyed reading it.

Nice flow to it. Keep writing.




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