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shes the girl you see
and instantly hate
you dont stop to think
you dont hesitate

total dislike
undenied loathing
just by her hair
just by her cloathing

but the funny thing is
she hates you too
by the things you say
the things you do

because without even knowing her
you turned up your nose
shes dying inside
and nobody knows



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Allykattz said...
Jun. 13, 2010 at 8:31 am:
I really like this piece, its full of emotion. Good job!
 
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FlyWithMe_899 said...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 9:27 am:
ooh. theres a really good poem. its very well-thought out. good jobb
 
JustAlice. replied...
Jun. 6, 2010 at 11:20 am :
thank you.
 
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MadAsAHatter;] said...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 6:17 pm:
wow, I never read this one, I really like it, it made me think about all the people that I just dismiss because I can't be patient or tolerant enough to just give them a chance
 
JustAlice? replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 9:11 pm :
i was thinking of you when i wrote this. it was after everything happened.
 
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