the girl over there

December 19, 2009
By JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge


shes the girl you see
and instantly hate
you dont stop to think
you dont hesitate

total dislike
undenied loathing
just by her hair
just by her cloathing

but the funny thing is
she hates you too
by the things you say
the things you do

because without even knowing her
you turned up your nose
shes dying inside
and nobody knows



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on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:31 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

I really like this piece, its full of emotion. Good job!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 11:20 am
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

thank you.

on Jun. 6 2010 at 9:27 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

ooh. theres a really good poem. its very well-thought out. good jobb

on Feb. 28 2010 at 9:11 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

i was thinking of you when i wrote this. it was after everything happened.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:17 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

wow, I never read this one, I really like it, it made me think about all the people that I just dismiss because I can't be patient or tolerant enough to just give them a chance


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