December 17, 2009
By JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

i feel the weight on my shoulders
it crushes down on me
it pushes me so low
i can no longer breath
pain shoots through my head
i feel it might explode
this isnt even the worst
of my frequent episodes
soon the pain starts to disapate
it leaves me feeling numb
i lay down on the ground
and wait for whats to come
then when nothing els is comming
and im free to do as i please
i cant seem to move a muscle
to even get up off my knees
so i just remain lying here
as the last of the numbness fades
and think of my continued pain
of the price that i must pay

The author's comments:
this poem is about the pain we inflict on ourselves unintentionaly

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on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:34 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

another great piece! very easy to relate to and also very visual! 5 stars!

Milo! said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:29 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:15 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

But what if that pain seems unintentional but really its not... just pain we want to inflict because we think we deserve so much worse.


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