we still remember

December 17, 2009
By JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge


it was raining hard
that late december
though long ago
we still remember...

she closed her eyes
she started to weep
he had failed to love her
she had loved too deep
she ran to him
he turned away
he had chosen to leave
she begged him to stay
she had told him the truth
he fed her dark lies
his love only imagined
her love simply denied
when she opened her eyes
she closed up her heart
then she too hold of his
and she ripped it apart

you may think it violent
extreamly so
but you werent there
youll never know


The author's comments:
this poem is about love and rejection i hope everyone who can
relate

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on Jul. 3 2010 at 10:39 pm
Fungi-Portal SILVER, Montreal, Other
6 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do or do not. There is no try.
-Master Yoda

wow, this is great :)

I really like this. it flows really nicely and it's very emotive. kudos.


on Jun. 13 2010 at 2:21 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

thanks! i like to leave out thing to make room for imagination. i submitted two more about a week ago they should be through any day now.

on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:38 am
Allykattz PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
45 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This much I know is true That God blessed the broken road That led me straight to you"-Rascal Flatts

very emotional piece, its almost like your telling the end of a story but leaving out the middle and it makes it full of mystery. love it!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:17 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

thank you i was inspired by a book. im glad you like it!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 2:15 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

"when she opened her eyes
she closed up her heart" i liked those lines! that was a really really good poem

on Apr. 6 2010 at 1:41 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

thank you very much. yeah i didnt really understand <3JuxxMeeh<3

on Apr. 5 2010 at 7:30 pm
Blondiee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want the rainbow, you've got to put up with the rain!"

wow. This is so amazing. I just found it in my favorites. I love it. and ignore <3juxxmeeh<3 she's my friend haha. 

on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:13 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I remember reading this before. I never told you how it made me felt. I love it, I think it reminds me a lot of what happened, but no one was there so they'll never know...

on Jan. 15 2010 at 4:26 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

thanks.i think?

on Jan. 15 2010 at 9:13 am
JustMeAriee BRONZE, Beaumont, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Because I care about you too much to look you deeply in the eyes it's because youve changed."
"If your looking for love and its staring you in the face then whyy are you questioning it?"

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