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Watching her fall apart,
Made me crumble too.
I didn't know how to help,
Or what I should do...

I knew that I could hold her,
And tell her it will be okay.
But then I began to wonder,
What else is there to say...

I can't promise her tomorrow,
Because I'm still not sure about today.
The only solution I could find,
Was to bow our heads and pray.



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beccalynn1663 said...
Apr. 16, 2013 at 6:39 pm:
you are incredible! i love all your writing you are a perfect poet:)
 
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Calliashi said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 11:20 am:
And the oscar goes to...bluemagnet!
 
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Someone_Who_Is_Loved said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 6:50 pm:
You're the next Oscar Wilde/ Emily Dickinson!!!!!!!!
 
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isabel18 said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:08 pm:

I LOVE ALL YOUR WORK! THIS POEM WAS SO TOUCHING! And truly going to God is the best thing we can do!

Great work! You'll be famous one day! LOL!

 
bluemagnet22 replied...
May 26, 2010 at 11:21 am :
Aw thank you so much:) I've been getting a lot of criticism on this site lately and your comments have truly been a blessing and an encouragement so I truly want to thank you for that:)
 
CassieSherman14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 30, 2010 at 7:22 pm :
Great! job! SOunds like you're a strong Christian and I am too! Wonderful job, keep writing. By the way, I agree with isabel18 about you becoming famous one day and I'm sure that many people on this site will be famous one day.( hopefully me included.)
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 11:05 am :
Aww thank u:) yes lets hope we become famous lol
 
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annexgrey This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 8:07 am:
Fantastic.
So raw and simple but heartwarming and touching all the same.
 
bluemagnet22 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:09 pm :
Thank u so much:)
That's such a compliment:)
 
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