As We Fall Apart

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I thought that things were solid.
We’d never come undone.
You told me that you loved me.
I knew you were the one.

Then one day we got to talking,
And talking turned to yelling.
How much longer can we keep this up?
There’s just no way of telling.

Now that things are shaky,
I wonder what’s the truth.
I fear that we won’t make it.
A heartbreak in my youth.

I know that we should say goodbye.
Out seems to be the only way.
But what’s right is too hard to face.
I’m scared to walk away.

But now you say you didn’t mean it.
My, how things have changed!
But still I have to ask myself,
Why do I feel so strange?

And so we tough it out some more,
Hoping for the better.
But I swear, I love you babe.
If that’s a lie, cut up my favorite sweater





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dreamer_believer said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 8:38 pm
great poem! ;) i for sure can relate. but the rhythm and flow of the poem made it really good. it has a kind of solemn feel to it, but i like it :) great job! would you mind checking out some of my work?, ha id love your opinion! keep writing :) :)!!
 
LiveItUp replied...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 2:44 pm
thanks. :)
i'll definitely look at some of yours. look at some of my other stuff too, if you don't mind. i'd love any feedback.
 
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