Searching For Thy Stars

December 4, 2009
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Darkness sweeps thy sky clean,
Desperation makes me look closely
But not one star is seen.
Why would one desire to see stars that previously were?
Linger on such a sight that I couldn't endure.... before?
Thy heart feels insignificant, but thy eyes refuse to cry,
not one tear breaks free from thy imprisoning eyes.
I speak to thy sky, why don't you speak back anymore?
I can't help, but to feel ignored.
I love thy sky, why don’t you love me?
Have you moved on to another that sight sees?
No one told me to wish upon a star,
for I'd wish many more stars to come so I’d never feel far… From where you are.

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dreamer_believer said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 8:40 pm
i like this! its really creative to write about the stars and the sky this way, it really got me thinking :) oh, and the rhythm of the poem makes it kinda roll off your tongue perfectly! :) brava!! would you mind commenting on some of my work? id love the feedback! :)
MsYumiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 9:44 am
I would love it if anyone who reads my poem can post how they feel about it :)
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