Dreaming Outside.

November 26, 2009
By carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.


The girl you see now? No, there's a lot more.
A whole other side; a heavy locked door.
Nobody knows what she's hid inside.
Nobody dares take away her pride.

She's got her own dreams, as big as can be.
All she needs now is some gaurantee.
She gives all she has, to reach for the stars.
But all it leaves her, are deep hurting scars.

She knows what she wants.
But no one can see
the magic she has;
all she can be.
They all see through her.
Right through her eyes.
But just wait for the day
when she touches the sky.

With the weight on her shoulders,
she crawls through the day.
And when no one is looking
She goes her own way.

She knows what she wants,
but no one can see
the magic she has;
all she can be.
They all see through her
right through her eyes.
But just wait for the day,
when she touches the sky.

This girl follows no one.
She'll walk her own direction.
She chases her own dreams,
with no need for protection.

I know what I want
but no one can see
the magic I have;
All I can be.
They all saw through me,
Right through my eyes.
But today's the day,
that I'll touch the sky.



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on Oct. 30 2011 at 5:55 pm
Countrylife4 GOLD, Maine
11 articles 4 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday soon we're gonna catch that dream we've been chasing"
"Seven days without a horse makes one weak."
"The worst part of riding is when you dismount."

Insult my clothes, I say, “Okay, thanks for the compliment.”
Insult the way I look, I say, “Thanks for notifying me.”
Mock me and say riding isn’t a sport, and I’ll say,”You say that ’cause you can’t ride.” But before you make fun of my horse, make sure you have “911″ on your speed dial.

I like how you put your self in another person's point of view. Then at the end, you put your self in as you were talking about you.

Sorry if that's confusing. It sounded a lot better in my head. Keep Writing though!! I loved this one!! =)


k.s.h. GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2011 at 8:13 pm
k.s.h. GOLD, Depauw, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood and I--I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.


Robert Frost

SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 26 2009 at 8:35 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

Thank you so much((((:

on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:59 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

for real this is my fav poem ever!

on Dec. 19 2009 at 8:43 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

I. Love. You. (:

foshomoe said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 8:00 pm
CARRRLYYY!!!11111 YOU'RE THE MOST AMAZING WRITER I KNOW AND YOU'RE MY IDOL AND I LOVE THIS POEM IT'S AMAZING!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU! :) No seriously. I don't think I've ever read something so beautiful before. Thanks for making my evening! :)

on Dec. 19 2009 at 8:00 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

Thank you SO much. I really appreciate your support(:

ellenm34 said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 7:59 pm
Absolutely gorgeous. I read your other poem "I Promise" too, you're a very talented poet and this poem speaks to me. I love it. A LOT. Keep it up, you're great! :)

Deeper said...
on Dec. 19 2009 at 4:48 pm
this is absolute perfection. best poem ive read in my lifetime.

on Dec. 19 2009 at 4:34 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

Oh my goodness. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU.

on Dec. 19 2009 at 3:48 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

this peom almost made me cry. it is so. it is so beautiful. absolutely perfect. i love it!

on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:23 pm
carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
21 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem." -Z.H.
"Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than 'I love you.' is lying." -John Mayer.

Oh my gosh. Thank you SO much!! I'm glad you think so! :)

on Dec. 17 2009 at 1:56 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow...this is the BEST poem I have EVER read on here! Absolutly amazing! The words and the flow so perfect and so real!


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