Beyond

November 29, 2009
By LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"


I know I love you,
But more than my friend?
Sometimes I lie in bed at night,
while you're trapped inside my head.
I've always missed you,
and wanted to be closer.
Sometimes I think I got my way,
the more that we grow older.
You tempt me,
and I don't feel the guilt.
Sometimes I wonder why that is;
from the friendship we have built.
I dream of you,
and wake up with a smile.
Sometimes I close my eyes again,
just to keep it for a while.

I talk to you,
and feel sad when you hang up.
Sometimes I stall to keep you on;
I can never have enough.
I love you.
Whether it be right or wrong.
Always will I think of you,
and tomorrow will I long.



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AfroSamurai. said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 10:45 am
Wow, this was beautiful. You conveyed the emotions perfectly, and I know exactly how you feel from a similar situation. Since you know who this is, you should explain this more to me when you get a chance. P: Great job. I still marvel at your wonderous writing abilities.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 10:09 am
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Haha thanks! :) I really appreciate it when people look at multiple poems and rate and stuff, so thanks!! :D I'll check out your work as well.

on Dec. 30 2009 at 9:24 pm
Shivanie BRONZE, Manhattan, New York
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
expect the unexpected

no kidding lol

btw i love all ur poems keep writing :)P

on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:01 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

You know what I just realized? Shivanie and Leilani rhyme perfectly, and nothing I've ever found rhymes with my name. :D

LaVonna SILVER said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 11:36 am
LaVonna SILVER, Owatonna, Minnesota
6 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
"dont let education get in your way of learning" -my American Lit teacher

awhhhhh soooo cute :)

on Dec. 21 2009 at 9:02 am
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

:) Power to you.

on Dec. 20 2009 at 10:39 pm
Shivanie BRONZE, Manhattan, New York
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
expect the unexpected

maybe i will tanxs

on Dec. 19 2009 at 5:10 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Mine knows. That's not the problem for me. Maybe you should tell him, sweetheart.

on Dec. 19 2009 at 3:37 pm
JustAlice. SILVER, Wesley Chapel, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." Moulin Rouge

im almost speechless. this is an amazing piece of work. please keep it up

on Dec. 18 2009 at 8:08 pm
Shivanie BRONZE, Manhattan, New York
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
expect the unexpected

wow i feel the same way of someone 2 bad he doesnt know

on Dec. 16 2009 at 6:31 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

Thank you. This poem was filled with so much passion...but it's raw emotion I've kept inside for a long time. Actually, I wasn't going to post this.

kheart SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 3:13 pm
kheart SILVER, Union Grove, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every second is countless. Every minute is different. When you came around." -kheart

This is a really great poem keep writing!


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