The Revolutionary Night

November 11, 2009
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Churning and pooling all around me
kayos and death pollute the morning air
brown and green hidden in bushes
the bombs explode in the distance

men yell and shout in the fields
guns go off, shooting off faster than blinking
fire sweeps the forest never sparing
as the cries and screams explode loader than canons

crawling through the dirt and brush
stomach protesting with each move
the rivers flooded with red and ash
men and women fall

our flag is still standing strong
blowing in the wind and rain
hope doesn’t wash away with blood and water
the images of hope and freedom stronger than ever

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matt h said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:35 pm
really caputures the chaos of war love.
Aleece replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 4:16 pm
Thanks so much! thats what I was going for in this article! Soo...thanks :)
Best Friend said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:49 pm
i <3 it
Zackle said...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 1:47 pm
this took my breath away! How can such a young mind know of such terrible but real things?
Mady=:) said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 8:05 pm
deep...............................took my breath 2 find an air mask!
Dec. 7, 2009 at 5:46 pm
sososoosoossoosososossoososoosososos good...... your like the next big thing! love ya
lilbro said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 6:07 pm
That's really good.....what inspired you?
Aleece said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 10:39 am
Kate's great....thanks 4 the comment
Aleece said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 9:13 am
thankz....its toushing that people care what"s going on around us
kaswimmer said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 9:11 am
omg this is so touching!!! i makes you think about whats going around all around us. and that life isnt always rainbows and butterflys, that people sarcifice eveything for what we have...freedom..and that we take it for granted
Dogz4life said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 9:10 am
wow-this is really good Aleece
xxxitsgreattobelovedxxx said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 4:34 pm
its deep realy deep. Luv it. HOWS KATE?~ K
sandy said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 12:43 pm
This brought tears to my eyes. How could a teen be so aware of the great sacrifcies made to keep our freedom?
DayDreamer said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 10:23 am
OMG this is soooooooooooooo good! I love it, its deep
mommacat said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 10:05 am
this girl is a very old soul I wonder if she has lived through this war before.
Aleece said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 9:43 am
please comment :)
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