November 8, 2009
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The moon shines brightly
As the snow falls pure and white,
The only thing that touches me
And remains untainted in this light.
The wind blows softly,
Carrying your words to my ears unrestrained;
Moving through me silently
And forever leaving your hands blood-stained.
The shadows grow darker,
Somehow deepening as you turn to leave.
Swallowing the heart I left at your feet
That now I know I can never retrieve.
The clouds move in faster
As the world falls around my ears
And while I watch the snow turns crimson,
Drowning in a pool of love-stained tears.

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Milo! said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:18 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 6:05 pm
i love this! the imagery in the poem is great- i can feel and almost see what the writer is trying to tell me. the emotion is amazing! the rhythm and flow of the poem makes it easy to read and 10 times more meaningful! wow, just an amazing piece! :) LOVE IT...5 stars :) check out some of my work if you could and comment, id love your feedback. keep writing!
Meru21 replied...
Nov. 28, 2009 at 2:05 am
Thank you very much. I really appreciate your enthusiasm. . I myself only gave it about three and a half stars, so thanks for such a high rating. ^^
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