Your Cliche Lies

November 1, 2009
I Used To Be Your "Babydoll",
I Used To Be Your Joy,
But Now I'm Starting To Think,
Maybe I Was Just Your Toy.

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Imagination said...
Apr. 16, 2010 at 5:48 am

short but sweet.

this is amazing!!!! =')

KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 7:12 pm
Just wondering: the poem's kind of funny, in a good way. It's the capitalization that really got me. Was it meant to be funny?
dreamer_believer said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 6:15 pm
ahhh....i LOVE IT!!! :) wow. it's so honest, and yet so sweet and pure at the same time. very creative and almost whitty ;) amazing poem for being short. i just love it :) would you mind checking out some of my work, id love to hear what you have to say? oh and PLEASE keep writing!! :)
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