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Eyes searching.
Heart beating.
Hands caressing.
Nose smelling.
Knees trembling.
Fingers caressing.
Heavy breathing.
Lips touching.
Baby comming.
You leaving.
Me crying.
Baby growing.
No father.
Just me.
You left.
no surprise.
Later on,
You come back.
I dont want you.
He doesnt need you.
You scream.
I scream.
You hit.
I fall.
Baby cries.
His mommy dies.
Now there's nobody.




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ItzStar said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:41 pm:

This is SUPER great...I just added it to my favorites.

Awesome Job!

Yours Truly,

Star Kaohu-Scorse

PS: Check out my [2] poems...

 
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Emma6 said...
Dec. 19, 2010 at 9:36 pm:
wow. this is so true for so many single moms.
 
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frogsof2015 said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 1:56 pm:
Wow. That was great beyond belief.
 
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jesseay09 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 8:34 pm:
wow thats all I can say.
 
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LeilaniLives said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 8:11 am:
That's sad, but touching. I'm glad you wrote this piece. It's like the flowing of thoughts rather than describing the story; and, it all flows together from the line of thoughts and emotions to a story. Beautiful.
 
Winged.Living.Free.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:33 am :
I visited a home for abused mothers, it was so sad. We gave them things for Christmas. So very true. . . good job with the emotions. :)
 
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KrYsTeN said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 12:44 am:
...wow... touching...
 
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GreenLover said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:11 pm:
wow that is so true. nice work keep it up. if you dont mind could you take a look at some of my poems???
 
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Milo! said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 4:15 pm:
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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*~Lynx~* said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 11:11 pm:
Reality... in its truest form.
 
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alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 9:16 pm:
oh my gosh that was so powerful
 
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michelle_my_belle said...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 11:51 am:
Disconcerting!
 
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