lips touching

October 18, 2009
By 20hiscaiti09 GOLD, Sperryville, Virginia
20hiscaiti09 GOLD, Sperryville, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more"


Eyes searching.
Heart beating.
Hands caressing.
Nose smelling.
Knees trembling.
Fingers caressing.
Heavy breathing.
Lips touching.
Baby comming.
You leaving.
Me crying.
Baby growing.
No father.
Just me.
You left.
no surprise.
Later on,
You come back.
I dont want you.
He doesnt need you.
You scream.
I scream.
You hit.
I fall.
Baby cries.
His mommy dies.
Now there's nobody.



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on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:33 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

I visited a home for abused mothers, it was so sad. We gave them things for Christmas. So very true. . . good job with the emotions. :)

ItzStar BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:41 pm
ItzStar BRONZE, Waianae, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Imma Overcome, not be breaking down instead"
-Shirnel Enos

This is SUPER great...I just added it to my favorites.

Awesome Job!

Yours Truly,

Star Kaohu-Scorse

PS: Check out my [2] poems...


Emma6 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 9:36 pm
Emma6 BRONZE, Hesperia, California
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Ghandi once said that 'whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.'" ~Tyler Hawkins, Remember Me

wow. this is so true for so many single moms.

on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:56 pm
frogsof2015 SILVER, Farmington, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
you got nothing to lose if you have nothing to begin with.

Wow. That was great beyond belief.

on Jun. 4 2010 at 8:34 pm
jesseay09 SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
5 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are and say what you feel.... Because those that matter... don't mind... And those that mind... don't matter.

wow thats all I can say.

on Jun. 4 2010 at 8:11 am
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say 'Life's two steps forward and one step back' - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?"

That's sad, but touching. I'm glad you wrote this piece. It's like the flowing of thoughts rather than describing the story; and, it all flows together from the line of thoughts and emotions to a story. Beautiful.

krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 12:44 am
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.
*krysten*

...wow... touching...

on Apr. 21 2010 at 11:11 pm
GreenLover SILVER, Anaheim, California
5 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is but a number

wow that is so true. nice work keep it up. if you dont mind could you take a look at some of my poems???

Milo! said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:15 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:11 pm
*~Lynx~* SILVER, Cathedral City, California
5 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love someone, let them go. If they come back to you it was meant to be.......

Reality... in its truest form.

on Dec. 26 2009 at 9:16 pm
literaryaddict PLATINUM, Albuquerque, New Mexico
23 articles 3 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We're almost there and no where near it. All that matters is that we're going." Lorelai Gilmore, Gilmore Girls
"The whole theory of modern education is radically unsound." Lady Bracknell, The Importance of Being Earnest, Oscar Wilde

oh my gosh that was so powerful

mcw_816 SILVER said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 11:51 am
mcw_816 SILVER, Short Hills, New Jersey
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Disconcerting!


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