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Just Another Love Poem

October 11, 2009
a.(L) SILVER,
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
. . . So take too many pictures, laugh too much and love like you've never been hurt, because every 60 seconds you spend upset, is a minute of happiness you will never get back. ( L )


xoxo, a.(L)


As I lay on my back
And stare up at the sky
The sun sets above me
But I’m watching your eyes

With your hand in mine
And your holding me tight
The stars pierce the back
And glisten so bright

Now there’s that smile
That I love to see
There’s no place else
That I’d rather be

From feeling to words
There’s just too much to say
Like I love you, I need you
Please don’t go away

I can hear your heart beating
From where I’m resting my head
No words can describe this,
So just kiss me instead . . .



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on Mar. 31 2012 at 11:57 am
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

That was really beautiful, nice work! Ps. Please check out my poems BLACK FLAME, THE MONSTROSITY:FAME, BLOODY ROSE, BATTLE OF THE LAMB, MISTRESS OF THE ICE FLOWERS!!!!!!!M pleas!!!!!!

on Mar. 23 2011 at 1:30 am
Speedyloris GOLD, Seattle, Washington
11 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself, everyone else is already taken"

I'm usually all about free verse, but this poem was so touching and visual. It brought shivers down my spine and butterflies in my stomach, shit. this was frickin fantastic. please. dont. stop. writing.

Nauti721 said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:20 am
Nauti721, Cleveland, Ohio
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I really love this poem, it is so nice and makes me want to snap my fingers. two thumbs u!!

on May. 18 2010 at 5:42 pm
iknowyourheart BRONZE, Casper, Wyoming
1 article 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I'll borrow words from all my favorite paragraphs to write a ballad while we say the things we hope would mean the most to me and each letter sent I've found in the pages of hope for the days when I feel like I've lost everything."-mayday parade

AWWW! Baby I love it! it brings back painful but beautiful memories.

 


on Apr. 3 2010 at 10:31 pm
thoughtfulsoul PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
25 articles 0 photos 49 comments
This is so beautiful!! It is hard for me to find any other words to describe how much I like this poem. None that would do it justice. I also agree that this needs to be published. It is one of the best I have seen on this site

AmnyR BRONZE said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 4:01 pm
AmnyR BRONZE, Clifton, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 134 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the whole world. ~unknown

close to perfection!

on Nov. 22 2009 at 1:16 am
make*it*real BRONZE, Yellow Sprigs, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
wow this was amazing.i love it!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 9:04 pm
cassandra_2011 PLATINUM, North Pole, Alaska
28 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Give in to love, or live in fear."

wow this is amazing. You're a phenomenal writer! There's nothing I'd change at all with this. The rhythm is perfectly flowing, the rhymes are great, and you show great emotion. Great job! Keep it up.

~Just a fellow writer

a.(L) SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:56 pm
a.(L) SILVER,
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
. . . So take too many pictures, laugh too much and love like you've never been hurt, because every 60 seconds you spend upset, is a minute of happiness you will never get back. ( L )


xoxo, a.(L)

aw thanks :). Means a lot.

on Oct. 17 2009 at 5:06 pm
romance_lover GOLD, Edmonton, Other
12 articles 0 photos 28 comments
i dont understand why they wouldn't publish this. You have major skill and people don't know what there missing. NEVER, never stop writing. Your words really touched my heart and i will never forget it.....amazing


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