Broken Mask

August 9, 2009
By mklvntwr22293 BRONZE, Massena, New York
mklvntwr22293 BRONZE, Massena, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix


Hidding behind a mask,
day in & day out.
Cause everyone will ask.
what its all about.

I'm sick of this mess,
why wont it go away?
It's time to confess,
whats made me sway.

All I ever feel is pain,
I'm sick of being hurt.
This feeling I cant contain,
for now I'll be alert.

This won't happen again,
I'll make sure of that.
I'm so sick of men


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on Sep. 27 2009 at 2:38 pm
mklvntwr22293 BRONZE, Massena, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix

Lol. I actually had another line at the end, and I guess it got cut off or I forgot to put it lol.

on Sep. 24 2009 at 10:11 am
ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
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The body is good, but the last line does seem abrupt. Maybe refrase it? I really love the poem :)

on Sep. 23 2009 at 7:00 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I liked the poem but i felt like the ending came a little abrubtly. I really liked the poem while i was reading it and then the end came up all of the sudden... but over all it was really good


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