Broken Mask

August 9, 2009
Hidding behind a mask,
day in & day out.
Cause everyone will ask.
what its all about.

I'm sick of this mess,
why wont it go away?
It's time to confess,
whats made me sway.

All I ever feel is pain,
I'm sick of being hurt.
This feeling I cant contain,
for now I'll be alert.

This won't happen again,
I'll make sure of that.
I'm so sick of men

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Tyne T. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 2:38 pm
Lol. I actually had another line at the end, and I guess it got cut off or I forgot to put it lol.
Chris P. said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 10:11 am
The body is good, but the last line does seem abrupt. Maybe refrase it? I really love the poem :)
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 7:00 pm
I liked the poem but i felt like the ending came a little abrubtly. I really liked the poem while i was reading it and then the end came up all of the sudden... but over all it was really good
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