Just Fine

June 2, 2009
By sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
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I Don't Hold On,
I Just Let Go,
Because Your The One Who Left,
For Reasons I May Never Know.

I Tried To Understand,
But You Wouldn't Let Me In,
You Put Up That Wall,
Not Knowing Felt Like Sin,

I Tried And Tried To Convince You,
For Nights That Lasted Forever,
But In The End It Was Clear To Me,
We Would Not Stay Together,

So For A While We Went Our Seperate Ways,
We Both Needed Some Time,
You Found Another Girl,
But I, I Was Just Fine

When We Talk Now All You Can Say Is,
You're Sorry For Hurting Me,
But I Say It's Ok, I'm Good Now,
The Chains That Weighed Me Down Before Have
Disappeared, I Have Been Set Free

You Ask If It Was Worth The Pain,
Maybe It Was A Mistake
I Respond To You "It Was Love,
So It Was A Chance I Had To Take",

There Are No Hard Emotions Now,
Hate Is Not Something I Feel,
For I Could Not Resent Something,
So Vivid And Surreal,

The Memories Are Nice,
The Ones Of Me And You,
But They Are Only Memories,
For We Are No Longer One, But Two

I Do Not Know What My Future Hold,
But I've Learned For The Best, For Sure
Love Can Be A Wonderful Thing,
But Also A Disease Without A Cure

So When I See You Now,
And My Heart Begins To Shine,
I Remind Myself "He Is Your Past,
And Without Him You Are Fine


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on Jul. 19 2011 at 6:35 pm
singingwriter14 BRONZE, Chester, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Some days you're the statue. Some days you're the pigeon."

I know I may be a little tardy to the party here, but this is really good. I love it! :-)

on Apr. 27 2011 at 6:45 am
White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
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I teared up reading this aswell. Wow.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 6:04 am
White.Roses DIAMOND, West Chester, Ohio
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Wow. I teared up reading this. I could connect with it so well. Amazing job.

on Jun. 1 2010 at 9:56 pm
sarabellum93 GOLD, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality."
~Edgar A. Poe

Very well written, truly beautiful

~from one sarah to another


Sammi<3 GOLD said...
on Dec. 13 2009 at 9:00 pm
Sammi<3 GOLD, St.Charles, Missouri
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Amazing! Good job Sarah!

on Sep. 12 2009 at 11:04 pm
sarahxinsane921 SILVER, St. Charles, Missouri
5 articles 4 photos 10 comments
Thank You Soo Much For The Comments And Views.

A Couple Lines In Here Are Not What I Wanted Tho..

My Friend Retyped It From My Journal As Ironically I Recieved A Phone Call From The Guy This Was Written About. Wierd Right?

Anyways Thanks For Your Feedback

-Sarah

hope said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 5:57 pm
that was asome!!!!!!!

i jus had to print a copy it was sooo good, keep on writing and good luck!

on Sep. 12 2009 at 5:44 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

uhm wow. this is just really good. so emotional and i can relate to it. but wow, you wrote it very well. it flows great, and it has deep feelings and deep meaning ;) all around amazing! check out some of my work and comment if you can, i love the feedback.

Emmy said...
on Sep. 12 2009 at 3:49 pm
I love how u transistioned through this. Your pain showed through in the beginning, but by the end it was obvious that you were on your way to not needing him. Beautiful poem.

on Sep. 7 2009 at 8:03 pm
amusedsimpleton BRONZE, Winnemucca, Nevada
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This is really, really good. I love it.

Amber said...
on Sep. 6 2009 at 7:34 pm
This is absolutely beautiful!

You'll be perfectly fine without him. If he didnt have the decency to put you in his life dont even think twice about putting you your own!


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